evaluation

Final Video 25.06.09

We have decided to not use this clip as we realised that i am a bad actor, and teh dediting would have been hard to do becasue i couldn't stop laughing. Also i kept dropping the book incorrectly.

lesson objective 23.06.09

My lesson objective for today is to edit the footage i shot last week in order to fulfil assessment objective 3.

Screenplay proforma

The Book

The Number Of The Draft,1
Date 16th June 2009
Group Number 4
Writer Names (Dale Furniss 3385 Sam Goulsdborough 3415 Hayley Copeman 3043 Claire Johnson 3577 )
Block Number A1










































EXT. COLLEGE FRONT – DAY

SCENE ONE

ESTABLISHING SHOT OF COLLEGE

SCENE TWO

PERSON A and PERSON B both walk the same way through college towards the doors. They both look bored and like normal college students. PERSON A is carrying many books. PERSON A is in front of PERSON B, 4 meters apart. PERSON A drops one of the books and PERSON B sees it.

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PERSON B is overly shocked.

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PERSON B then picks up the book.

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PERSON B looks worried and shouts over to PERSON A.

PERSON B
(Loudly)
Excuse me; I think you’ve dropped your book

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PERSON A then turns around with a very shocked expression.

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They smile and look happy.

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Both characters walk together at a fast pace.

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PERSON B passes the book back to PERSON A. PERSON A says thanks seeming happy and relieved.


PERSON A
(Relieved)
Thanks

Lesson Objective 22.06.09

My lesson objective today is to edit the footage i shot last week in order to fulfil assessment objective 3.

I met this objective by editing my short movie.

Plan for play